ext_30020 ([identity profile] drsquidlove.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gen_storyteller 2008-02-21 11:45 am (UTC)

Great piece. I'd been putting off reading until it was done, so, yay. It's done.

Too bad Giles was out of town, because Xander surely would have told him to do something. Maybe hang toward the back and avoid danger, or research the history of ceiling tiles.
Nah. Giles would enjoy the researching too much.


Awesome. I love Xander's pleasure at being in charge, and being good at it, and even better, his anger that his control and coolness is sucked away in a second by Angel's arrival.

It took a moment more for Xander to catch his breath. “She’s on some heavenly Rodeo Drive. Shopping.”
Angel nodded. “New shoes. A purse.”


Nice.


Dr S.

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