ext_76642 ([identity profile] aurey09.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gen_storyteller 2007-01-29 11:53 pm (UTC)

I’m speechless (in a good way...I think...)

"Buffy may have had Slayer reflexes, but Dawn had the memories of growing up playing touch football with a sister who always fell for the same moves. She faked right, went left and threw herself over the edge." - I like how Dawn uses her fake memories to get passed Buffy and when Dawn tries to sacrifice herself everything goes to hell. *rolls eyes at self*

Fake heaven seemed too perfect. Creepy ending, I liked it.

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