ext_15200 ([identity profile] myfeetshowit.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gen_storyteller 2007-02-05 12:33 am (UTC)

You used the contrast of sensation extremely well here, painting the image of heat. It makes Buffy's chill that much more alarming.

Sometimes nothing can keep you warm.

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