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2007-02-19 04:50 pm (UTC)
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Fascinating! I read it through nearly to the end before I really figured out the twist, then of course had to re-read!
Really interesting POV here. I don't think Dawn came off too young; I think her thoughts really work for the character. Liked this a lot!
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Really interesting POV here. I don't think Dawn came off too young; I think her thoughts really work for the character. Liked this a lot!