ext_15168 ([identity profile] spikendru.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gen_storyteller 2007-01-27 09:32 pm (UTC)

This was wonderful! Lorne is rather difficult to write, and you've captured him perfectly in this. And I love your Wesley; of course he would immediately confess to being fired as a Watcher and take all the blame for Buffy's and Faith's choices on himself. I loved that he accepted Lorne's reading and decided he wasn't a failure after all - now he can go on to continue to keep AI going and make the hard choices.

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