ext_52748 ([identity profile] shinodabear.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gen_storyteller 2007-02-22 05:13 pm (UTC)

Ooh. Very nice. I love the "Click"s in the beginning of the chapter. Really nice detail/break-up/mood-setter. Makes you feel like you're waiting for something, and that's what this chapter is to me. Everyone waiting around.
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