ext_15323 ([identity profile] lilachigh.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gen_storyteller2007-02-15 10:00 pm

A ficlet for a man without whom there would have been no Buffy

Title: Pick up the Phone
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lilachigh
Rating: None


PICK UP THE PHONE!

He stood in the cool of the back room, where the sun never reached until evening. The tiled floor was cold under his feet but the sweat on his face was hot. He was staring down at the little glass window on the telephone. It showed eleven messages. He hadn’t answered one,

No, that was a lie, of course. He’d listened to the first one, let the grief roll over him and away. But he didn’t want to hear her voice again: telling, explaining, crying, pleading, going from sad to angry with thin overtones of disgust.

If he listened to the calls he would have to act: fly back, be Dad to Dawn, whom he loved but didn’t feel he really knew and to his Buffy who’d been so helpless, sweet and funny until at fifteen, suddenly, she wasn’t anymore.

[identity profile] zanthinegirl.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch. Pretty much how I've always pictured him...

[identity profile] scarlettlily.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Very interesting but Hank should have gone back because his girls needed him!

[identity profile] zandra-x.livejournal.com 2007-02-15 11:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, very nice. 8 ]

[identity profile] poisontearss.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Nice little drabble...nobody ever writes much about Hank Summers, assuming this is him and his relationships to both Buffy and Dawn :) Nice to read something refeshing.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
I really like this; it shows Hank as much more complex than most people assume.