If I were writing it now, I'd add more actual dialogue but all in all I'm happy with the images I caught.
This would be a great fic to use to show what telling is versus showing. In fact, as I remember have the reason I chose the style was rebellion against that dictum. The classics tell all the time, why not me!
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Date: 2007-02-15 03:57 am (UTC)This would be a great fic to use to show what telling is versus showing. In fact, as I remember have the reason I chose the style was rebellion against that dictum. The classics tell all the time, why not me!