You've caught the rhythm of his speech. He tends to use short phrases and I can hear him as I read this. I find writing Lorne difficult because I'm English and don't have an ear for American phraseology or language. I have to consult the Buffyverse Dialogue Database for all the American characters.
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Date: 2007-01-27 07:18 pm (UTC)