Given that it's the concluding part of Spike's 'journey (I like that word), it could only have taken place when you've set it, on the way back from Rome. If you're willing to do the rewrite, I'll certainly give it the once over.
I've just finished 'Ice' but haven't worked out how to go about giving you feedback. Email me with what you'd like me to comment about. I'm working on my final chapter and it's almost done but I'm losing two days this week (anniversary coming up).
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Date: 2007-02-26 09:53 pm (UTC)I've just finished 'Ice' but haven't worked out how to go about giving you feedback. Email me with what you'd like me to comment about. I'm working on my final chapter and it's almost done but I'm losing two days this week (anniversary coming up).