This is your first attempt at writing fanfic? I'm definitely bookmarking the other chapters to read!
This draws the reader into the story and makes one want to know what happens next. But, but . . . poor Connor! He's been through enough; he can't be at risk again to be used as a pawn! See? Now I want more!
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Date: 2007-01-28 09:25 pm (UTC)This draws the reader into the story and makes one want to know what happens next. But, but . . . poor Connor! He's been through enough; he can't be at risk again to be used as a pawn! See? Now I want more!