I really enjoyed the characterization, especially Xander, and the way you mix dialogue from the show in what the characters might have been thinking.
"We changed an ancient mystical line; I think that proves we’re pretty much good for anything." Willow grinned. Pride before a fall - now where did we see that with Willow once before?
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Date: 2007-01-27 11:52 pm (UTC)"We changed an ancient mystical line; I think that proves we’re pretty much good for anything." Willow grinned.
Pride before a fall - now where did we see that with Willow once before?