The time-shifting is quite jarring, but I think that it works well with what you're trying to put across. That last image there and the end really stays with you. Very nice.
The only thing that throws me off is I was a good wife. in the beginning. I didn't see the "I" voice anywhere else. At first I thought this would take the place of "Anya" but that was used later on. Was this intentional and I just missed something, or was it a keyboard!oops moment?
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Date: 2007-05-15 07:29 pm (UTC)The only thing that throws me off is I was a good wife. in the beginning. I didn't see the "I" voice anywhere else. At first I thought this would take the place of "Anya" but that was used later on. Was this intentional and I just missed something, or was it a keyboard!oops moment?